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Our Assessment:
C- : ineffectual, muddled See our review for fuller assessment.
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Incendiary is (nominally) an epistolary novel, a woman living in London who has lost her husband and young son to a "9-11"-type terrorist attack telling her story in a letter addressed to Osama bin Laden -- recounting, venting, explaining, looking for catharsis and an end to the horror.
The one-sentence description sounds interesting enough -- and was presumably enough to get Cleave a book contract.
Unfortunately, the resulting novel does not live up to the premise.
I don't want 25 million dollars Osama I just want you to give it a rest. AM I ALONE ? I want to be the last mother in the world who ever has to write you a letter like this. Who ever has to write to you Osama about her dead boy.(It doesn't seem obvious that lots of moms out there are writing letters to Osama, but hey .....) It turns out she only began writing to Osama in 'Winter', but she tells her story more or less chronologically, beginning in 'Spring' -- but that's among the least clumsy aspects of the presentation. Worse is how forced the Osama-premise is, the person she is supposedly addressing essentially forgotten over large stretches of the novel. Sure, maybe it's only a framing device so she can get all this off her chest, but it's not employed to very good effect. Worse still is the voice: Cleave lets her write in run-on punctuation-less sentences (meant to be suggestive of her state of mind and lack of education ?), but unfortunately Cleave can't help showing off what a fine and clever stylist he is: there are turns of phrase and expressions attributed to this woman who makes so much of her very common background that couldn't possibly come from her pen: they sound good -- Cleave has the stuff -- but they're entirely out of place, jarring reminders of the artifice of the novel. Worst, finally, is the story itself, and how it unfolds, the focus almost entirely personal, too many of the occurrences unlikely or bizarre, and almost all the potential of this rich material left unused, each promising twist quickly choked off, Cleave preferring to head down yet another dead end. (Among the few things that can be said for Incendiary is that it is largely unpredictable.) The narrator is far from a perfect wife and mother. She may be tidy, but, when she gets nervous, she also likes to seek comfort in the arms of other men (not entirely convincingly -- one would figure she'd start sleeping around a hell of a lot more after losing her husband). And when her husband was off bomb-defusing and there was nothing left to do at home she'd wander off to a pub, leaving her four year old son home alone. It's on such an outing that she meets Jasper Black, a yuppie journalist who writes for the Sunday Telegraph and lives across the street from her (she in a flat in an out-of-place council estate, he in a much nicer residence). Jasper falls for her, hard -- though he has a posh girlfriend, Petra, who also writes for the Telegraph -- and figures quite prominently in the unfolding catastrophes. This is part of perhaps the oddest aspect of the book, because it turns out this isn't so much a book about terrorism in the modern age or the personal toll it takes, it's a story of class conflict in contemporary Britain. Everybody seems to have a hang-up about class: the narrator endlessly reminds the reader that she's a humble working class girl from the East End, who knows her place and where she doesn't fit in. Jasper and Petra are from a different world, but fascinated by the working-class mom: Jasper isn't exactly slumming it, but he's especially taken by what he perceives to be her straightforwardness (apparently he's surrounded by lots of phonies), while Petra thinks putting her into a fancy outfit would be enough to change her life. (The shopping expedition Petra takes her on, to Harvey Nichols, is exaggerated, but does allow Cleave to show off some of what he's capable of, as when he has his narrator describe her befuddlement at the clothes on offer: The labels weren't any help either. The brands were called things like PHILOSOPHY and THEORY and IMITATION OF CHRIST. They didn't sound like clothes they sounded like the things I'd failed my GCSEs because of.)Class is the central issue for the one other main character, Superintendent Terrence Butcher, her husband's boss, who eventually also hires her to help out in the office (in yet another entirely unbelievable twist). His marriage is falling apart, largely because of the class-difference between him and his wife. It's one of the other rare powerful scenes when Butcher describes the moment when it dawned on him that he and his wife came from such very different worlds -- but powerful doesn't mean it fits: Butcher's class-issues, like the class-issues throughout, the novel seem largely irrelevant. Sure, it allows him to connect with the narrator more readily, but the harping of these characters on the class-divide (which they seem to be doing their best to maintain at all costs) takes away from some of the more interesting things going on -- like the terror-threat. For a novel about terrorism there's not much excitement or suspense. 'May Day' is described well enough, and Cleave shows a nice touch in dropping in some of the changes that it causes in asides (a nurse suspended from her job, because Muslims have been suspended (for an "indefinite but temporary" time) from jobs where they might pose a security risk; the observation that: "you can't leave a ciggie butt unattended these days without someone coming and doing a controlled explosion on it"), but for the most part one doesn't get much of a feel for the changed atmosphere. The personal focus -- through the limited eyes of the narrator -- isn't the worst idea, but Cleave doesn't carry it through very well -- and he doesn't help matters by resorting to far too many scenes in which the narrator falls unconscious or asleep or gets drunk or suffers yet another psychotic break (yes, she sees her little boy all over the place, and, boy, does that get tiresome). It's hard to believe she wouldn't have gotten psychiatric help along the way; she certainly needs it. But even leaving aside the psychological issues, she and her buddies (Jasper, Petra, Butcher) all drink way too much (and, in some cases, consume too many drugs): it may be true to life but is also boring as hell. Part of the problem seems to be that Cleave can't decide whether she should be mourning (and dealing, as best she can, with her loss) or denying it (as suggested by her constantly thinking she's found her darling little boy again). He appears to want it both ways: that's certainly a way to go, but he doesn't do it very well. There are, eventually, two semi-decent plot-twists -- though perhaps they just seem that way because something finally happens in this surprisingly dull narrative. The problem with both, however, is that Cleave can't do much that is very compelling with them. The first one is a good idea -- new information about 'May Day' comes to light -- but what he does with it (the plan is for Jasper and Petra to get it published in their newspaper) is just ridiculous. As newspaperman Cleave knows, there's no way this information could get published in a UK paper (at least not the way they plan to do it) -- but, in the Internet-age (and with streaming video) there's almost no reason they would even bother mentioning it to the newspaper first. Certainly, this bombshell could not be as easily suppressed as he does in the novel (and the betrayal that goes along with it is also pretty pathetic). The concluding twist also blows up in Cleave's face (or rather: he blows it up in the reader's face): it is again a decent idea, but the panic he sets off with it hardly seems worth the trouble, his narrator (who can't swim: "I never learned. I mean there wasn't much call for it in the East End" ...) bobbing down the Thames just too ridiculous a sight. Incendiary is barely lukewarm. It's not very effective as a story of loss: yes, mom yammers a lot about what she's lost, and it is a terrible thing that has happened to her, but those ingredients do not suffice to make for an effective meditation or portrayal of grief and tragedy (and Cleave piles on so much else -- especially the class-issues -- that he just makes a mess of it). It's also not very effective as a story of what living in a world facing terror means -- but then it doesn't really try to be that. The Osama-premise is, ultimately, just confusing -- not so much regarding the question of whether she actually means to post it to Osama (though one wonders), but her purpose and her motivation: by the end Osama seems among the least of her problems, and only indirectly to blame for the ugly world she inhabits. The most confusing aspect of the book remains Cleave's incessant harping on class-conflict -- a surprisingly old-fashioned focus (at least in its artless presentation here). Just a guess, but Oxford-educated Telegraph journalist (who lives in Paris !) Cleave does not appear to come from the same milieu as his narrator (the alternative: he is, and is carrying the biggest of chips on his shoulders). The class-issues (both upper and lower) he presents seem TV soap-opera-like, and his choice of presenting them through the eyes of this particular type (a woman, from the East End) makes for an even more distorted picture (because his narrator doesn't sound very much like the person she is meant to be (or the type she is meant to represent ?)). Cleave's writing itself isn't half-bad, but plot (beyond the big ideas) and character (and with them, voice) escape him here, making for a disappointing read. - Return to top of the page - Incendiary:
- Return to top of the page - British author Chris Cleave was born in 1973. - Return to top of the page -
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